Saturday, April 27, 2013

Ship Of Ships Comments

Rating: 4.0

It is sinking

Irreversibly.
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Doug Blair
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Brian Johnston 19 April 2014

I usually don't like 2nd hand poems (imagining other's experiences) as much but your poem does a lot to warn us that this is ultimately a universal experience, we all sink on a ship somewhere and it doesn't matter how fine she is, or how prepared we are for the vagaries of the future, our end is still in God's hands. Nice write!

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