Friday, July 12, 2013

Ship Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.3

Close thy eyes and be my ship of dreams
And we would sail across atlantis
Down to all of imaginations tales
We would sail beyond world's end
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Craig Moses Uche
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A well expressed poem embellished with nice rhyme, images and wonderful poetic expressions.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 January 2022

Commendable resolution. I most sincerely appreciate your words, 'I'd wipe away thy tears I, d take away thy fears And i'd be thy captain I'd bring thy enemies to the sword Most solemly i'd keep my word'....Top score and to my favorite.

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Jayne Davies 02 January 2022

Very good write! Well done.

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 February 2018

I liked the way you wish to embark on a journey with your dream and captain your ship. A brilliant write\.

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