Close thy eyes and be my ship of dreams
And we would sail across atlantis
Down to all of imaginations tales
We would sail beyond world's end
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Commendable resolution. I most sincerely appreciate your words, 'I'd wipe away thy tears I, d take away thy fears And i'd be thy captain I'd bring thy enemies to the sword Most solemly i'd keep my word'....Top score and to my favorite.
I liked the way you wish to embark on a journey with your dream and captain your ship. A brilliant write\.
A well expressed poem embellished with nice rhyme, images and wonderful poetic expressions.