Sunday, April 11, 2010

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He walks beside her
Fantising her, beauty
She looks at him, wanting
He knows what he wants
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BRIDGEY Richards
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I thought that was very interesting, but it doesn't seem to have an ending. I think it could use some more, unless that was the effect you were going for. Anyway, cool write.

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