Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Ship Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ship lay up in the bay
Till east wind abates it stay
Perhaps they wait for orders till
It’s on their way the holds to fill
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Don Pengilly
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Fay Slimm 23 December 2009

The sea flavour in this attracted me Don and the clear way of phrasing too adds to the narrative... thanks for the sharing, 10/10 from Fay.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 December 2009

A well penned poem, you know what you are really talking about, and you are the captain of your on ship, keep on sailing, you are heading a long way,10+++keep it up, Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year to you and family, Love and Peace...

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Don Pengilly

Don Pengilly

Bury, Lancs, UK
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