Shining Stars, You Shine Comments

You are pure And you endure. None can hurt you. Only God can defeat you! ....Beauty is your name, light is your name and ability...... but remain humble always. a great advice you make........ thank u dear poet humility is what i learned from your great poem. tony

such an interesting poem kept it up such inspiriation i enjoy it really much

wonderful poem dear obed, keep writing and thanks for sharing

Aww I like this poem :) you wrote it well. Very nice!

Very well done! And if I were a teacher, I'd gve you, a nice shiny, star! Keep up, the good work.

I like how you put a rhythm in some stanzas. Like it.

Most of your English is good.

Good subject and nice effort - - warm flow to the whole.... Fay.

Shining stars, you shine so brightly. Your light is always shiny You are known to the galaxy. You are many but of royalty. Your fame stays You burn not hays. Your beauty all I desire to have. All men, you they love. nice write up. thew above lines have been corrected. you can read any of my poems which run 1000

Words have an up beat to them

What a beautiful poem! Describing each little thing about the shining stars. I never see shining stars before, but I know it's existing and has a great deal in this life.

A star poem praising the stars. 'Twinkle, Twinkle, little star, How I wonder what you're, Up above the world so high, Like a diamond in the sky! '

A nice poem and a good underlying message.

wonderful descriptive poem for stars, fulfilled with celestial light...............10+

Good work, Obed. You are becoming a better writer. We all always want to improve, it's true.

Good, nice poem. You have flowing narration.