On my way with unknown destiny
Found a star bright and shiny
Blind and dumb folded watched its glory
Aspired access, met its fury
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such a small verse yet packed with so much meaning. very good poem
To achieve, have to have courage and determination The will to turn around the things of inclination. All the best, dear poet. Reach where you want to.
Very nice poem. Highly imaginative idea. good presentation. Kudos.
couldnt agree more Vidi Writes (6/11/2009 9: 49: 00 AM) To achieve, have to have courage and determination The will to turn around the things of inclination. All the best, dear poet. Reach where you want to. cheers