Friday, May 13, 2005

Shine Comments

Rating: 3.8

Let it shine, because you look so fine
Let it shine, I want to make you mine
I want to take you to Jamaica to see the sunshine,
Then I take in the chapel and make you mine
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Dwayne Gordon
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Lisa Wilkinson 12 April 2007

A bright piece of work with great sentiment, bravo. Keep shining.

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Verlecia F 05 November 2006

CUTE~AND WHAT EVERY GIRL WANT TO HEAR ~I LIKE IT~

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John Tiong Chunghoo 13 May 2005

lovely lovely i like the rhythm that brings out the whole meaning of the poem.

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Souren Mondal 08 February 2016

Yes, it does...

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Dwayne Gordon

Dwayne Gordon

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