Shine Upon Me Comments

This is so beautiful, a wonderful plea, and so well expressed. I really liked this one, it had a spiritual depth. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

a prayer to heavenly lights to wake the mind up from sleep wilderness...beautiful verse rich in rhyme and rhythm, Andrew, as always in your poems...10

Poem is very poetry poetry type word flow - very nice

What a beautifull write Andrew my friend. Once again you have captured my heart with your imagery filled pen..... Very nice, sad, but the way you have chose the words to flow, it is filled somehow with hope..... Bonnie