Shine, Shine Comments

Such emotions in these words of this poem. Great poem

A beautiful poem Sina.But the mood of sorrow and suffering has not covered the shining Sun within you.

It is full of sorrow, but considering depression and sun light relation and using simple structure are it's advantage.

change suffer to suffering or sufferings...............your bio speaks of depression. i am very glad poetry has helped you deal with disappointment.

that's very depressing.very nice written and so meaningful. I do not want to write that everyone has came to this world because of reason. I had or better say have the same soul as you have. As you've said this poem is for everyone. Thank you so much for this beautiful poem.

The words budding with the most glowing light, so shed your tears by the sunshine and heart light, this will make you feel better, adopt the bravery and you will keep shine with you every time and every day_Unwritten Soul

You are not alone in how you feel, so many feel the same way from time to time. But it will pass I promise you that. Keep writing, see all the beauty that is around you and write about that.

The more sad a poem is the more I'd keep at heart because you are right this world is of suffer. Beautiful write, thank you!

So beautiful and heartfelt Sina! Shine, shine your beautiful light! Thank you!

always depress and the same title., but good and beautiful.