Shine O Sun Shine Comments

Shine o sun, shine on The earth and on me. Shine on land, on trees, Shine here smilingly. shining sun, born smile.... desires. happiness, all written in words and presented to shine...... thankyou very much dear poetess. tony

There are so many poems about rain around at the moment - has everyone emigrated to the UK! ! Seriouslly though Nil, this is a lovely poem.

Always beautiful as the sun rays! May it shine upon you. I love it Nila.

Pools are full, Grey is the sky. We want to bask, To make us dry////// Really a wonderful poem! ! ! ! ! top marksss! !