Shimmering Water Comments
On the banks of River Rhine
Under the morning sun
And the blue sky shining
The gentle breeze rustled
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The poem flows on like the river, painting a peaceful picture.10.
A fantastic and delightful read becuase of the lovely imagery that you have so generously entwined this composition with. Thanks for the invite to read.
A good piece.(Try 'Relection'.) Congratulations on your vast volume of work.
It is wonderful to look into your things which can be youself clearly and lucidly.
The riverside scenes have been beautifully described in the poem.
I can't rate or comment to 'POESIA'... i can't understand them but this one I can... the clap of four hands in a single body is what I think this poem deserves... nice write!
It was a very nice poem. I liked the english, which was all I could understand. I wish you could translate it but it is your poem and it is unique. Congrats! *~Layla Stone~*
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9/18/2025 3:54:18 PM # 1.0.0
Nature is indeed wonderful and you have eloquently placd the reader beside a river that brings hope and merges with life of all forms. A mental place of peace is the imagery that comes to mind as I read.