Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Shimmering Sea Of Questions. (Funny) Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Lost in the ocean of shimmering water.
Stuck in my tiny canoe.
The evenings continue to get hotter and hotter.
And I don't know what I'm supposed to do.
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Poet of the River
ocean swimming
COMMENTS
Kevin Patrick 25 October 2011

Your flow for this is organic and resonates fluidly, with rhythmatic textures that come naturally to your writing, plus the dash of humour only adds to the fun.

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Constance K Yost 30 August 2011

Ashleigh, I positively love this and can see no room for improvement! Your title is great-content is so charming and surprise ending is the frosting on the cake! ! Constance

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
Poet of the River
Poet of the River
California, but move around a lot.
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