Shimmering Comments

Thank you for taking me on a sunny summer's journey from a watery mirage to nature at its best. A delight to read and experience.

A beautiful imagery drawn by the poet that acquaints the readers with 'a flax field': 'Drawing closer, I saw a field Of flax. Flowers and leaves Inter-weaving ten thousand times And gleaming in the sun.' This stanza reminded me of the two lines from William Wordsworth's 'Daffodils': ' Ten thousand saw I at a glance, Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.' She has a truly imaginative mind, like that of great poets.

I like the poem, though I have never seen a field of flax.