Sunday, April 27, 2008

Shiftless Under Black Eyes Comments

Rating: ★5.0

All alone
It’s what I’ve dreaded
I make you what you are,
You’re tightly threaded
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Raven Rasputin
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Kim Barney 10 December 2014

I've read all ten of your poems and this is your best one. Fantastic rhyme scheme. A ten from me.

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Chuck Audette 16 June 2008

Long time no poems? Good to see a new one. Liked your rhymes and also the strength in your revealing words. -chuck

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Danny Fairfield 27 April 2008

Wow! I some what felt you on that poem

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