Shifting Sands Comments

the sand is always shifting from one place to another, sometimes this reminds me of people this is a good write

The fragility of human relationships wonderfully compared with something written or drawn in the sand. I like very much the last line that contrasts the transientness with the permanence of the life lesson learnt.

Some we think are friends are not true friends at all - such are indeed rare gems to treasure if we are lucky enough to be blessed with them. Excellently Jasmeen.

some words inscribed and a face. Face is the index of heart. Thanks my dear poet. I like it Thread fragile. wonderful. heart touching. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

True friends are rare, with a lot of friends were on shifting sands, it is a hard lesson we learn from them! Great write!