Monday, June 30, 2008

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She lies on her bed of mushrooms,
waiting for her orchids to bloom.
But in the heart of the desert,
she locks herself in its chambers.
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Michael Fischer
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Bonnie Collins 30 June 2008

Enjoyed the beginning very much but somehow it has a tendecy to lose the reader....... just my own oppion, otherwise very good......

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