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Feelings of loneliness
In a land unknown
Familiar faces in an unfamiliar sea
Oh! Heart mine, don’t go pieces
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Jahan Zeb
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Kanav Justa 18 May 2013

when you hove got hills as your companion, , theres nothing to feel lonely about, , , , , enjpyed reading it, , ,

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Karen Sinclair 15 May 2013

this is well written. although you start off sounding unsure of your new surroundings, your final description sounds like somewhere most on the planet would like to live...i wasnt sure which poem you wanted me to review so i picked this one purely by the title..which i loved...plz feel free to have a butchers (look) at any of mine... tyvm karen

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Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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