Sunday, July 31, 2016

Shhhh Don't Make Noise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shhh! don't make noise
let the tranquillity
seep into my senses
and mesmerise
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Nabakishore Dash 11 December 2021

Shhh---- inner soul.Awesome write.

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M Asim Nehal 29 December 2020

let the silence give leash to my disturbed thoughts and let my heart decide the fate of my life

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M Asim Nehal 29 December 2020

Awesome peom....

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Rajnish Manga 29 December 2020

It's time to think life from a new perspective / and let me make peace with my chaotic emotions / God.... help me overcome the trauma of a heart break // This is exquisitely crafted poem that reflects an anguished and a bruised soul in the aftermath of an emotional trauma. Thanks for sharing.

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Varsha M 29 December 2020

Yes blissful. So well penned. Yes let me be alone to myself as i figure out the wrong and build the new.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2016

From a new perspective! ! And to move on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 August 2016

He will help those who help themselves. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2016

Inspiring........just to sum up and follow your instructions, no noise! ! !

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Nosheen Irfan 02 August 2016

Beautiful, beautiful. So well expressed. We all need tranquility in life. The turmoils of life are often too much to bear. This poem is a great reminder for us to take a break and get a grip on ourselves n our life. Very well written. Full marks to you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 July 2016

Hi Aarzoo, Your admonition to the world, .... dont make noise...... It is time to focus on God, takes us through the times where everything done against His wishes is attributed to his 'holiness' and 'holy faith'. Well done.

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2016

Silence and introspection have always helped me in the long run. Thanks, Aarzoo

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