Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Shhh Comments

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'Shhh' read the scribbles made in haste
upon that cold gray wall
as darkness covered alley paths
and dread fell over all
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Liilia Talts Morrison
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Margaret O Driscoll 10 January 2016

'Before I found my voice again and closed that frightful book', you convey so well the dread experienced as a child in war and the time it took to recover from it, great poem!

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Colleen Courtney 14 May 2014

Such a powerful poem you've written Liilia! Though incredibly sad it's written so beautifully. Well done!

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Gajanan Mishra 13 May 2014

play and fun banned, what is life then, good writing, thanks.

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