Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Sher (Lion) Aya Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deko deko koun aya
Sher aya…
Sher aya…
Bijli, pani na makan laya..
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Farah Ilyas
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Ramesh Rai 02 August 2013

now we r habutuated so we do not fear this lion.bcoz. after completion of the term become cat n seeks our mercy

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 July 2013

Na mere hse me kuch aya, na tere hse me aya Sub isi ne kaya As usual feudalism in Pakistan, cronyism in India and nepotism in Bangladesh and the spasms in Srilanka with the chasms in Afghanistan and Iran.Good one

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 June 2013

Like Soul, I too enjoyed the repetitive word and they make a lovely sound...even though I don understand the language. Siya_! !

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Xelam Kan™ 22 June 2013

Hahahahah ab iss k liye aor kiya liken Fara ji.... Sher ki kaal me deko tu Ik Choha ham ko darany aya... Noon walon se bach k rehna ji...

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Survi Sharma 20 June 2013

wonderful write enjoyable

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 June 2013

this is the tiger Politicians and political bills against the will of the poeple thanks

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Unwritten Soul 19 June 2013

I know nothing about the language but i enjoy the repetitive words, it sounds fun...maybe funner if i know the words_Soul

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Payal Parande 18 June 2013

oh my how wonderful true and hilarious i guess with todays situation truth is always taken as a joke brilliant didi here is your standing ovation......

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Wahab Abdul 18 June 2013

only one word '' wonderful ''

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Gajanan Mishra 18 June 2013

wonderful and meaningful, thanks Farah, grate write. I invite you to read my new poems and comment and vote.

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Vartika Pandey 18 June 2013

Now that was some sarcasm, , ! Great! I heartily invite you to read my poems and give your views.

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Farah Ilyas

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