Saturday, November 1, 2014

Shelter Comments

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Shelter
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Cold, quite cold
Is this world
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 November 2014

beautifully profound thoughts, an humbling experience to read.

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Valsa George 02 November 2014

I am just a pebble from sand To be rolled down latter or soon Unto that quiet home Free from storm and gale This is the ultimate reality of life! In our mad rush, if we can contemplate on this thought occasionally, it will make our lives sober! Profound thoughts! Enjoyed!

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Salini Nair 02 November 2014

I am just a pebble from sand To be rolled down latter or soon Unto that quiet home Free from storm and gale........................ beautiful poem....enjoyed...

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Saheb Mohapatra 02 November 2014

yes, shelter is the only place where we are very safe and are provided a life of millions of pearls........great poem......thanks

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 01 November 2014

Cold quite cold, come summer come winter and where I dream my final rest in the grace of simple stone is lovely shelter. Excellent description and beautiful sharing in Forum. Outstanding poem.10@10

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