Friday, January 29, 2021

Shelter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a mariner's sleepless, anxious eyes
Catch sight of the greenery of a far isle
My hope with a sigh finds refuge in you.
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 March 2021

Revisiting this wonderful poem. A poem of faith and hope. Very uplifting.

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 February 2021

The last retrieve a disturbed hear seeks is god's abode. Very very beautiful poem a mixture of hope and fath. My compliments

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Thank you very much dear poetess. When we place our hopes at the feet of God we feel a sort of satisfaction that our hope is half way through manifestation

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 31 January 2021

reality and illusion make far away the shelter of mind stability- unreachable but the notion function of poetic mind makes it near to heart!

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Thank you dear

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Thank you dear Magatab. Your words are true. It's the creation of our mind to find the horizon where meet reality and illusion

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M Asim Nehal 31 January 2021

Patience is key to solace. No matter what the situation is and what test we are going through with patience and faith we can sail through. A motivational poem.5** And straight to my poem list.

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Thank you very much dear Asim Nehal. Your philosophic words are great and true. Faith and patience are really the wings of the bird of our life.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 January 2021

A marvellous poem that glides between reality and illusion drifting like a yacht.

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Thank you very much dear Geeta Menon. Your poetic words are a source of abundant energy

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Thank you very much Dr. Dillip. Imediately after publishing this poe I could notice that you have added it to your poe list. But later it vanished. It can be an oversight of Ph site administration. I have similar experience with some other poems of mine too.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2021

When our hope dwells in God everything will be alright. Wonderfully crafted. To my Poem List.

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Thank you very much dear RMJ.Your words really hail me to the heights of creative satisfaction

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2021

A beautiful poem woven by a beautiful heart and mind.

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Thank you for the humbling comments

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Varsha M 29 January 2021

This is really true. I like these words of yours. My shelter is still distant, beyond the horizon Where meet in unison reality and illusion...we all long for this

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Thank you very much Varsha. We long for many things in this world but their manifestation always take place far beyond the horizon of our thoughts like an illusion turns to reality

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Savita Tyagi 29 January 2021

Beautiful thoughts. We are going through a rough time collectively. Expressing it as well listening to other is important. We poets do it through the medium of poetry.

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Thank you very much Savitaji. Expressing and listening to others is definitely important in these days of chaos

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