Thursday, April 6, 2017

Shells Inside The Shell Comments

Rating: 5.0

The journey inside a shell never ended,
where do I exist?
When I removed the first shell
I saw a network of social relationships
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Valsa George 07 April 2017

Though the thunders frightened me and sometimes I was injured but I felt a lightning conductor within me that saved me for the day Sometimes we are frightened by the roaring wind and thunders of life, but we experience a shock absorbent within ourselves and soon the beams of light and the calm after the storm enter our life! This experience keeps us going! A highly philosophical poem! A sure 10

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