Monday, April 27, 2009

Shell On The Shelf Near My Bed Comments

Rating: 4.8

Shell on the shelf near my bed
Take me back to memories box
Last summer on Virgin Island beach
Alone fighting words creating poem
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Mohammed AlBalushi
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very excellent, loved it, beautiful way of writing and dreamy images..

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 May 2009

A beautiful romantic Write...........evokes nostalgic feelings..........

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Lee Crowell 01 May 2009

what is it about the beach that brings us romance? you nailed it down quite nicely Mohammed, thanks for this I gave you a nine because you need to work on your basic grammar and spelling

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Eyan Desir 28 April 2009

Well, this was Well written poet Good job

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Mohammed AlBalushi

Mohammed AlBalushi

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