When thou break the shell of tear
I see there a world of cheers.
Where I begin to breathe eternity
Like thine solemn jannitor of purity.
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WOW! ! ! it is an amazing poem... speaks a lot... n delivers a lot! ! ! Absolutely loved reading it.... it has a classical touch too..........
..i admire this brilliant piece of writing my friend.. ..you really are good...this was an amazing poem... ..i just loved reading it.. ..
This poem adds beauty to the very idea of Death. Well written.
'Though this life may lose surrealism- / My soul will enter His Imperialism' (pretty words)
deep meaningful words are really outstanding and shown the pen of a real poet. great!
It is my view that the soul is eternal and this body we possess is temporary... So it is our duty to learn and become more than we were meant to be... Only then may heaven become a reality... Very nice poem...
wow! ! ! ! ! ! pleasure to read your poems Vipin chetta! something is special in your each poems! this is a very brilliant poem. greatly thought provoking and philosophical one. you have a very good point of view about life. well done Pal! ! !
good poem I dont know if I can be a good judge. Aan way, I just have a question.. 'why did you choose the old forms of the pronoun 'you' '? Do you have a specific intention? thanx
Hey, are you really from Kerala? What a classy style! ! ! .......10***** Rose,