Sunday, December 18, 2011

Shell Of Tears! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

When thou break the shell of tear
I see there a world of cheers.
Where I begin to breathe eternity
Like thine solemn jannitor of purity.
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Dead Rose 09 January 2012

Hey, are you really from Kerala? What a classy style! ! ! .......10***** Rose,

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Blossom Mist 05 January 2012

WOW! ! ! it is an amazing poem... speaks a lot... n delivers a lot! ! ! Absolutely loved reading it.... it has a classical touch too..........

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Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

..i admire this brilliant piece of writing my friend.. ..you really are good...this was an amazing poem... ..i just loved reading it.. ..

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Supriya Prathapan 02 January 2012

This poem adds beauty to the very idea of Death. Well written.

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Areeba Sohail 01 January 2012

uffff great write! wonderrful!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 December 2011

i value the way u think st this young age. good

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Shamba Kaunda 28 December 2011

what a way to play with words nyc job

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Neetha Sasidharan 28 December 2011

nice rhyming words n nice idea

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Vishnudev Murikkanattil 26 December 2011

Great theme. Brilliant presentation.Apt usage.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 December 2011

an advanced thought from a youth

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Aaron Barth-Martinson 25 December 2011

'Though this life may lose surrealism- / My soul will enter His Imperialism' (pretty words)

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Kenebo Rajkumar 24 December 2011

deep meaningful words are really outstanding and shown the pen of a real poet. great!

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Cosmic Dreamer 23 December 2011

It is my view that the soul is eternal and this body we possess is temporary... So it is our duty to learn and become more than we were meant to be... Only then may heaven become a reality... Very nice poem...

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Jacqui Broad 22 December 2011

Very beautiful... Actually amazing...

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Dave Walker 20 December 2011

A great poem. The soul will always rise. Great write.

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Sajna Kailas 20 December 2011

wow! ! ! ! ! ! pleasure to read your poems Vipin chetta! something is special in your each poems! this is a very brilliant poem. greatly thought provoking and philosophical one. you have a very good point of view about life. well done Pal! ! !

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Andrew Blakemore 20 December 2011

A very well written piece Vipins, well done.

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Lama Mandow 19 December 2011

good poem I dont know if I can be a good judge. Aan way, I just have a question.. 'why did you choose the old forms of the pronoun 'you' '? Do you have a specific intention? thanx

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 December 2011

brilliant stuff man, very well written....10++++

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Binish Cd 19 December 2011

hi friend, very good poem.10+ regards binish

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