Sunday, February 2, 2020

Sheer Scintillating Selections In Six Selected Seconds.... Comments

Rating: 4.2

Sheer Selections in Six Selected Seconds
After having read his sweet sensational selection
the self has come to mind,
these lines to create for thine
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Bri Edwards 22 July 2021

'Definition of satiric 1: of, relating to, or constituting satire satiric writers 2: manifesting or given to satire' More comment to follow...some day. I DO like alliterations in general. bri ;)

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Flower Prince 03 February 2020

Wow! Wow! Wow! Writing a poem using Alliteration is quiet difficult for me but I have enjoyed this lovely work. Thank you very much for sharing this work. Full vote!

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Budhashaya Behera 02 February 2020

Sheer looks beautiful in alteration. Every line in this poem beautifully expresses your thought of high standard. This is super sublime and beautiful poem. Thank you very much for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 February 2020

Reading any sweet sensational sensation is definitely very nice and we have realized its importance after observing expression of this lovely work. The self has come to mind. Newest Alliterations created for this Momentum is very brilliant and interesting. In six selected seconds, sheer is sweet and selective. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work...10

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Denis Mair 02 February 2020

Wow. I love the sheer sweep of your syllables, spontaneously selected with such sweet salience. Seriously, it's wonderful to hear you warm up with two lines of assonance (" Dutch cheers for Heineken beers) before spitting out this series of Ss-es. The stimulus to my word-sense it's almost sadistic! And your use of " sastric" (pertaining to linked sounds) is proof of your wide vocabulary. A ten, and please tell me, whose poem inspired this?

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Denis Mair 02 February 2020

Whoops, the word I was thinking of that pertains to linked sounds is " sandhi, " not " sastra." But anyway your " sastric" is better here, .. like the sounds of someone reading from a deep Hindu sastra.

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Denis Mair 02 February 2020

And I like your serendipitous marrying of " salience" with " dalliance" to make SALLIANCE! Heh-heh.

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