It is funny and ironic
And remarkably stupid
How I’m trying to convince everyone else
When I can not even convince myself
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Women really do put up with a lot from guys, you have to love them!
You have some really wonderful lines in this poem Ivy, 'Your shine is not really blinding' and 'Of your sugar coated lies, ' but what I find most stunning and impressive here is the journey of realisation you go through, realising all the faults and knowing what you have to do - to move on. Congradulations on an excellent poem, my friend.