Tuesday, June 15, 2021

Sheep On A Green Field Comments

Rating: 5.0

could not fall asleep
started counting sheep
did that from the deep sleep I encountered
all of a sudden, I sat up right at bed
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2021

Sleep well dear poetess! An excellent poem....5 stars

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Nabakishore Dash 14 December 2021

A good remedy to have deep sleep in ones life.

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KAVIN CHARALAN 16 June 2021

sleep and sheep ---good

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2021

Deep sleep fives us nice and amazing perception. Sheep has mesmerized mind. Sleepless night has brought up new dreams of many stars. A brilliant and thought full poem is well penned.

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M Asim Nehal 16 June 2021

Yes I heard about counting the stars but sheep, really interesting. We all have our own ways of doing things, I liked it.5****

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Five stars for a good night sleep....... : )

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Brain should be lulled to sleep without any thoughts. A thoughtful and amusing poem on sleep.

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if you start counting sheep or anything else for that matter, you can never get sleep.

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Dear Sylvia, after five days of not being able to log into PH, finally i am back to read your poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 June 2021

Liked the rythmn and images that embellished this lively and lovely write. Top Marks! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 June 2021

A marvelous poem well crafted

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 June 2021

Sometimes sleep is so elusive and we will find our mind wandering from one tbought to another.

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Indira Renganathan 15 June 2021

An amusing poem for a sleepless night...enjoyed....5*****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 June 2021

Just imagine and enjoy the poem and you will have no sleepless night! Right? Good Night Sleep Well

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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