could not fall asleep
started counting sheep
did that from the deep sleep I encountered
all of a sudden, I sat up right at bed
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Deep sleep fives us nice and amazing perception. Sheep has mesmerized mind. Sleepless night has brought up new dreams of many stars. A brilliant and thought full poem is well penned.
Yes I heard about counting the stars but sheep, really interesting. We all have our own ways of doing things, I liked it.5****
Brain should be lulled to sleep without any thoughts. A thoughtful and amusing poem on sleep.
if you start counting sheep or anything else for that matter, you can never get sleep.
Dear Sylvia, after five days of not being able to log into PH, finally i am back to read your poem.
Liked the rythmn and images that embellished this lively and lovely write. Top Marks! ! !
Sometimes sleep is so elusive and we will find our mind wandering from one tbought to another.
Just imagine and enjoy the poem and you will have no sleepless night! Right? Good Night Sleep Well
Sleep well dear poetess! An excellent poem....5 stars