Tuesday, February 20, 2018

Sheen Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have been waiting for her in a golden evening,
time is running with a faster speed.
She hasn't come yet!
I'm listening to the songs of beauty with the wings.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Nudershada Cabanes 26 February 2018

A beautiful poem of delight. Wonderfully crafted. Very imaginative. A 10.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 February 2018

A beautiful poem! Lovely expression: I now understand what the birds sing/I now understand why the buds are shy/I now know why the flowers smiled....Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2018

It is a gorgeous poem on love, sheen, beauty and happiness having haunting expression. Enjoyed. Thank u dear Akhtarji.

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 February 2018

An amazing poem, well wrote.

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Beautiful poem Akhtarji..then everything left except the sheen

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Loke Kok Yee 20 February 2018

An exciting wait ending in joyful fulfillment, a brilliant write that shows love in everything. Thank you sir.

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