slack-thighed and painted
like a red indian queen
she is enormous in the clearing.
animals come from the forest
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Wait now, Brian. Now your're heading into the world of FRIGGIN great poetry with this one. My god the visuals, strange, almost David Lynch like. Sordid. You are good my man. Keep 'em coming. You're on my list now dude!
Yow! Yet succinct and so grand. I enyoyed very much. Read mine - Wide Open Spaces - perhaps fun but in no way as enigmatic as yours. Adeline