Thursday, January 12, 2012

She Would Take The World To Bed Comments

Rating: 5.0

slack-thighed and painted
like a red indian queen
she is enormous in the clearing.
animals come from the forest
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Brian Purdy
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Adeline Foster 05 June 2012

Yow! Yet succinct and so grand. I enyoyed very much. Read mine - Wide Open Spaces - perhaps fun but in no way as enigmatic as yours. Adeline

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Scotty Dogg 24 January 2012

Wait now, Brian. Now your're heading into the world of FRIGGIN great poetry with this one. My god the visuals, strange, almost David Lynch like. Sordid. You are good my man. Keep 'em coming. You're on my list now dude!

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