Monday, June 18, 2012

She Would Have Been Loved Comments

Rating: 2.5

She's sitting on the balcony in the dead of night,
singing to herself, the only thing keeping her alive.
She's so beautiful,
if only time was taken to get to know her.
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Arianne Owens
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Tiana Webb 19 June 2012

Wow, this is a beautiful poem. To capture such emotion is stunning. I can feel her heart's pleas to be loved by someone. A truly beautiful poem. Amazing! ! Tiana xx

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Wang Qian 18 June 2012

Fairly beautiful gentle poem ~~ I love your description - Soft white hair like mornings light, deep blue eyes like a stormy night. Heart of gold that will forever love, a heart forever untouched. impressive! !

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