Tuesday, April 27, 2010

*-* She With He - Comments

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MEN - only we are part of
woMEN
sHE - only we are part of
HEr
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Louie Levy
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 30 October 2010

wow, how did you think of that. Amazing. I overlook the words and the spelling, or i am just careless.--men part of women, nice line. and the last two lines are cute and funny. witty write.

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'Most absurd! ' As we men beat our chests If she appears not first then... it is totally absure thinking on our part.. We are abusing the holy place of origin..In any form she is supreme and occupies respectful place.. nice piece of poetry...10

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