She Will Stab You..... Comments

ofcourse..............being a lady she will stab you.............

WHAT MAKES ME WONDER IS HOW FOUR NOT RHYMED LINES STILL CAN TOUCH CROWD. SINCERITY IS THE KEY. THANKS TAMARA

Talk about cutting a problem out in short order! Hopefully it was not ment for me? EITHER WAY' vey nice... 10+++

Medically speaking diabetes is a silent killer So silence too Much in small Voted Ten dr. sakti

Very good poem, indeed. Small is beautuful.

i see why bad guys fear you......stab them TAMARA...........stab them! !

one of the best passive agressive attacks I have ever seen in a poem! ! ! The shortness of the poem was quick, as if you were really stabbing the person it was ment for. keep up the great quality of work.10+++

quite passionate evocative too, rancor seems to reason by clouds, ingenious write even with few words 10+++, thanks for sharing

hmmmmm.... yes a lot like that TaMaRa... you did tell me about it :)

very well written and short but the words were like an empithany an a slap in the face i loved it

this is good poetry...short and eloquent...thanks...10

I wont stab let we pierce in our eyes.........and the pain and joy shared....... you have made a good write and enjoyed in it .........

i love that you're not afraid to post short poems. although it's short, it's a worthwhile read. i can always imagine myself in the poems you write. good job =] With respect, Abby

more deep than a knife she can stab your heart through her silence.. yes it true.. well writtin.. thx for sharing tamara.. hazem al..

great write....so true....silence indeed is potent and very subtly expressed...keep it up! take care love summer

thanks all..my message may be reached..but mostly thanks Shan..loved your words mainly while a silent stare can do for a man..let his brain be smashed.I LOVE KILLING MEN....LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL....THANKS FOR MAKING ME LAUGH...nothing more sweeter than making a man suffer by a silence of his woman.....kidding guys iam very soft, with a warm loving heart..can't see any body suffer .Is it her fin that whipped? A knife? A dagger? A stiletto? Nor a chainsaw A mesmerizing chainsaw Gleaming and sparkling as ever . That ripped apart the fish’s insides A slaughter The limbs gashed The lungs crashed The skull smashed The legs dashed The veins slashed'

oh i know this feeling... hey i ll quote my poem 'The Mesmerizing Chainsaw' ...... Yet, for a glimpse Fish or the the serpent saw light, A radiant beam of survival An exhilarating sight for The sore eyes The veins for a moment Rippled in ecstasy The sight of the angelic mermaid The smile Alluring and shining as always Her fin Swaying and glittering as sea’s waves Yet Is it her fin that whipped? A knife? A dagger? A stiletto? Nor a chainsaw A mesmerizing chainsaw Gleaming and sparkling as ever . That ripped apart the fish’s insides A slaughter The limbs gashed The lungs crashed The skull smashed The legs dashed The veins slashed' well this is how just silent cold stare can kill a man.. i guess, man knows it better than a woman i guess.. anyway this is a nice one indeed...10++ with lots of love to you shan

Yes indeed silence can be the most potent weapon Tamara...great write 10

silence whisper- it's a fine poem! 10+

Silence is a virtue of all people.