She Will Stab You..... Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

She Will Stab You.....

Rating: 3.4


She will slap your heart,

she will stab you

by her silence,

by her ignorance of you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 11 July 2009

i see why bad guys fear you......stab them TAMARA...........stab them! !

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Howard Kern 09 July 2009

one of the best passive agressive attacks I have ever seen in a poem! ! ! The shortness of the poem was quick, as if you were really stabbing the person it was ment for. keep up the great quality of work.10+++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 July 2009

quite passionate evocative too, rancor seems to reason by clouds, ingenious write even with few words 10+++, thanks for sharing

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hmmmmm.... yes a lot like that TaMaRa... you did tell me about it :)

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Danny H 30 June 2009

very well written and short but the words were like an empithany an a slap in the face i loved it

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rago rago 27 October 2009

ofcourse..............being a lady she will stab you.............

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Emma Adamyan 31 August 2009

WHAT MAKES ME WONDER IS HOW FOUR NOT RHYMED LINES STILL CAN TOUCH CROWD. SINCERITY IS THE KEY. THANKS TAMARA

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Howard Kern 22 August 2009

Talk about cutting a problem out in short order! Hopefully it was not ment for me? EITHER WAY' vey nice... 10+++

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Medically speaking diabetes is a silent killer So silence too Much in small Voted Ten dr. sakti

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Braja K Sarkar 14 July 2009

Very good poem, indeed. Small is beautuful.

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