Sunday, August 31, 2014

She Will Not Comments

Rating: 5.0

She started writing poems,
I read her poems,
I know only one thing about her,
She is just seventeen.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 20 October 2017

A poem of thoughts....................................................................................

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Salini Nair 01 September 2014

very meaningful, and its an advise that colors of love will change with time......nice

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Valsa George 01 September 2014

Having passed through such stages, Akhtarji, you know the intensity of her feelings and you have applied balm in her wounded heart ! Let us hope that she will soon recover! ........ Akhtarji.... you are sizzling with poetry these days! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 31 August 2014

It is painful to get hurt at the age of seventeen.But, it happens.A nice poem and a lovely response to a poet's pain.10

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 August 2014

A lovely poem with a great message. In teen age girls think they are whereas it is not love.

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 August 2014

A lovely poem with a great message. In teen age girls think they are whereas it is not love.

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