She Watches The Sunset Comments

Outstanding poem. FIVE STARS

Last two line took this poem to a level of satisfaction where poet hope to emulate like setting sun...All that really matters is that she's found her eden in the docksides' fading day.

CONT: These words mesmerized me, dear Poet! . This poem is from 2010 and yet it is ranked now as number 12 as The Best Member Poems of the Top 100. Top Marks, dear poet. CONGRATS! Pen some poems more. You are not here anymore, only your poems. Thank you that you once shared

I cite you here: She stands focused on the beauty of this day's decay, as a calm descends upon her with the weight of a falling star. She has found her peace in the flushing quiet that has consumed her mind.

I envy the setting sun....i can imagine the front and rear of this bit of expression...

Beautiful poetry. Great imagery and weaving words. Thanks for sharing.5 Stars.

This poem is breathtaking. So lovely. The lines: She stands focused on the beauty of this days' decay, as a calm descends upon her with the weight of a falling star. and Yet in this fleeting moment I graciously turn away. All that really matters is that she's found her eden in the docksides' fading day. take me to the scene of your poem and make me want to linger there. One of my favourites for sure.

Wonderful poem, good ending too.

Wonderful...especially the last two lines....thank you

The way this is written is amazing, As a romance freak I absolutly love this poem. To be able to paint such a vivid picture with so few words is true art. I can't wait to see what worlds your words will paint next. Awesome Work! ! !

This is pure poetry, it took my breath away beautiful.

it was buteiful i loved it from the girl gindding happeines and the guy leaaveing so the girl can stay happy. it is a great poem keep wrieting

The blue sky stretches far across the tepid marshland. It stretches far the reader with his imaginative radar.And imaginations are sometimes elixir for long standing agony.Your attempt simply does that.Thanks.10 i will give-though may be it will not add your carton -i am banned member here. But i wish you all the very best.

Wow, I love the picture of the sunset. And also the mention of envy because I've never thought of it like that. Someone envying a sunset because it's done something instantly that they couldn't achieve over a long period of time. It's very beautiful!

My My My! Hunter, this poem is beautifully written. Your vivid perception and striking image of a sunset seen through the eyes of 'She' is just magnificence.

The poem stands out for its sheer beauty.

The lingering beauty of the 'maturing sun' with all its 'mellow fruitfulness'. Awesome poetry with choicest metaphors and diction. Thanks for sharing. CP

gorgeous poem, love the intensity

wow this is so good, it paints a perfect, vivid picture. very good im very impressed

I am very impressed with your style of freely expressing your feelings, very heart touching and well penned, you have a great talent and a long way to go to prove to yourself, me and the rest of the world of this great poetic talent, Keep it up, you are in the right track and site, PH,10+++Love and Peace...