Tuesday, August 11, 2009

She Was The Girl.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was the girl
the universe liked!
never cared for dress
like a charmy new born
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lily peace lago every by to ph
COMMENTS
Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

yeah she was the girl and still is, the first and the last, the loveliest I ever see...the universe. Lovely words...good write, mate.

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Shilesha Johnson 25 August 2009

very unique.. i give it a 10

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

lovely and interesting poem.....10++++++++++++++

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Eyan Desir 12 August 2009

Well interesting poem....

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Dear Poet Ma’mn, Thanks for your comment on ‘Lithe Lips’. This is a nice one and a big thank you. Regards, dr. sakti. 11.08.09.

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Rakesh Bedi 11 August 2009

........ a nicely composed poem........

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Carol Gall 11 August 2009

nice lago a universal girl i like that

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

live in universe arakonam
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