Saturday, October 10, 2015

She Was Not Into Me Yet Comments

Rating: 4.5

Far away on the British LAND
There lived my love, where I was BANNED
Always wanted to show her HAND
If we had met, moon had SET
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MUSAWIR RAAKH
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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

Great depiction of the woman who has a place in your heart, but as yet has not found one in hers for you. Melancholy poem with a dim hope of coming together in the future, it is beautifully sad. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Musawir Raakh 28 October 2015

Thank you so much for your kind reviews dear Roseann shawiak,

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Anita Sharma 23 October 2015

Far away on the British LAND There lived my love, where I was BANNED Always wanted to show her HAND If we had met, moon had SET But she was not into me YET.................A fine portrayal of the eternal woman of your dreamland, i wish could send you a dream boat could take you far away to British land and settle all the debts... loved & liked

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