Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, October 11, 2013

She Was No More Comments

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“I shall be no more” appeared beautiful lines
I read the letter with nice sentence
But with enough of curiosity
As it smelt and reflected real quality
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 October 2013

cjblaze Maybe the most important thing is that You can write about it. You didn't faint after all

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 October 2013

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2 Ah, this seems unfinished...yet for the poet it is finished when they decide...to faint or live with the longing, either leaves an echo only the heart can hear. Lovely verse, I say... Dorothy Singing Still..'til the end of time

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 October 2013

very detailed, love it. Jane Reyes37 minutes ago Great poem Comment +1 Nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 October 2013

darran hardwick37 minutes ago Well written good luck with this. Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 October 2013

M. Smith39 minutes ago Not bad my friend considering the language barrier that is apparent Comment +1 .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 October 2013

E.J Marshall38 minutes ago Lacks a certain something, a little razzmatazz

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 October 2013

“I shall be no more” appeared beautiful lines I read the letter with nice sentence

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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