Monday, January 4, 2016

She Was No More Comments

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Her light finally gave in to the dark,
While her life lost its spark.
With the last breath she took,
Silence filled the room - death had struck!
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Goodboy Nkosi
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Anita Khelawan 04 January 2016

my condolences to you at the time of your loss... I enjoyed your poem... feel free to grace my page and leave your feedback.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2016

Death is part of us on this earth. Nice work.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 04 January 2016

Lovely, very well written.

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