Friday, January 12, 2007

She Was Late Comments

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I count the cars as they drive past the window
Four blues since you said everything was fine
The rain flows from the street into the gutters
Over both the yellow broken lines
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Ben Partenay
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Ivan Donn Carswell 12 January 2007

I like it Ben, it has a fine vision flowing through it - a sense of time passing with excruciating slowness. Nice use of colours... Ivan

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Ben Partenay

Ben Partenay

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