Friday, September 3, 2010

She Was Broken Comments

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She was broken and he made her whole.
She was whole and you broke her.
Now she tries to pull herself back again.
She wouldn’t want to ask him to make her whole again;
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Juvie Gubat
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Kevin Carney 04 September 2010

Nice write, you had me hooked all the way. I can relate to this with someone I care for and really saw what you were saying. Thank you for sharing.

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