Monday, April 27, 2009

She Was Broken. Comments

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She was cracking, but no one saw,
she was Bleeding, but no one cared,
she was broken, but no one fixed her.
She was blind, but no one helped,
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Melissa Schreuder
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Charles Wamuti 23 April 2010

I hope she stays with him and he takes good care of her. Good flow.

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DELETED NOW 02 June 2009

But if he becomes her everthing once it's all over she will no t recover and maybe even break worse. I know everytime I think someone is my everything, I just lose it all and become the rebel that is inside of me.

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Liz Scarce 27 April 2009

Best wishes to the girl....

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rago rago 27 April 2009

one of the beautiful write..............yes she will found him.

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