Wednesday, November 20, 2019

She Was Barely Forty Comments

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She was ill since years
Injured in kidneys
Attacked on her lungs
Wrapped in her own body
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Aadil Hingorjo
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Bri Edwards 20 November 2019

2 – Re: " In the terrified loneliness, she'd accompany her She would open the novels to console her" I don't know who " her" refers to in the first line, but in line 2 i think " her" refers back to " She" . i no longer believe in angels or God, but if i did, i'd say " She" would qualify for a place in Heaven. well done. Bri

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Bri Edwards 20 November 2019

1 – Line 4: I'm not sure what " wrapped" means here. Might you mean: “wrack(ed) /rack(ed) ”? ..” cause extreme physical or mental pain to; subject to extreme stress. “

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