She Was A Happy Girl Comments

I felt a gain of tempo in the later part of the poem. I wished it were a bit slow in revealing the ultimate consequences. Thanks dear poetess for the sharing.

Such a deep breath poetry... I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE and In the mid of the night depression you are killing me.... Naila

Faking happiness was her counter obsession Her heart was torn apart As she was unable to depart..asking for divorce...... the colness in bed with the rich prince........so many married people have such experiences...... you are highlighting it dear poet. thank u. tony