She Wants Him Comments

This is a great verse, Poet...It deals with profound emotions from the perspective of acknowledging innocence. Yet there is a tinge of sadness...that of which you write may be; it is not that which must be. Exceptionally well done.

I liked this poem of yours. It feels as if the emotions pour out live making it be visible and real expressing the true essence lovebirds often feel and try to overcome. Thankyou for this beautiful poetic expression. To hold her for so long as the sun promises not to set but to her belong....so beautiful opening. And this alone is life Is she a willing wife.....this sums up your poetry like a gem. Many admirations for bringing up this beautiful piece. Thank-you once again.