Monday, March 19, 2018

She Walks In Beauty Comments

Rating: 3.5

By fair means or foul
Once that I wish to say her,
You're so cute and beautiful
Do you wish me like I wish you?
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Ronjoy Brahma
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Akhtar Jawad 24 November 2018

A lovely poem, I think If I were a bird of the sky Or if I were the wind of the every afternoon, And every day, every twilight and at night, I could be see her happily as I wish and love A powerful concluding stanza.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 March 2018

Nice descriptive and imaginative write. However you may please check few correction in words and phrase, which would make it more perfect. Thanks for sharing.

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Ronjoy Brahma

Ronjoy Brahma

Amteka (Chirang) /Assam, India
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