She Walked Comments

She should have walked with cautious steps and the distance covered already is quite long! The last phase may be with little suffering we hope. What is great about this poem is Indrani Bhaduri`s precise and meticulous rendering of the thoughts into a short and meaningful write of the kind. The diction has been apt and meaningful.

we must all move on into tomorrow a great strong write

A poem of strength, this is life, that change has to take place in order for us to grow, A remarkable poem indeed.

I gave this a 10. Excellent poem of the strength it takes to step into a 'new world' after the passing of a mate. Love it!

nice poem i liked every word knitted here

nyc 1....bt a sad poem..it flows well.... :)

Not everything is lost! Hope lingers! The gates of paradise can open anytime! Though the poem started on a melancholic tone, the positive note at the close is relieving! Greatly enjoyed! !

Very nice poem sad but nice tone. Liked the flow and feel while reading. Well done.

A sad story is vividly narrated in beautiful images enhancing the theme of lost love and grief.

Paradise was lost but then it was regained. Sometimes we find ourselves plunged in the valley of despair. Sooner or later we see the light at the end of the tunnel and dig ourselves out. Please read my poem Valley of Despair. Loved this one.

: (pain depicted so nicely....

Take a deep breath and step into a new world. Nicely expressed to dispel despair. Thank you.

Love lost makes a great vacuum and then it gets filled with a poem of the kind. Wonderful write Mr Bhaduri...

Awesome! ! ! ! sir I loved reading it.Thanks.

This is very good. Nice read

agree with Aswath... and i love the imagery too thanks for sharing i invite you read mine

A woman with a broken heart ready to make a new start, hardships come, darkness prevails, she moves along with strength...lovely penning.

Full of meanings Poet. She can walks on this world or in another. She can be the first or the last. Anyway, good to think, Very well penned! ! ! !

I had to read this a couple of times and I still wonder whether there is a multitude of meaning in it. A shade of melancholy increases the richness of this write. Good one sir

With great insight and understanding of her love been forsaken she walk's, with hope into unknown territories. Outstanding write you have expressed so brilliantly her need to move forward with each step she take's!