Monday, July 18, 2016

She Waits Comments

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She waits there
Waiting for you
To change your mind
Just to care
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Ally White
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Carl Roussell 14 November 2018

Si much hurt when love is one sided - a good poem.

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Joseph Harlacher 19 July 2016

looks to me like the problem was she waited

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Tom Billsborough 18 July 2016

A thing we're guilty of sometimes. It's very well expressed. Get your skates on Ali. Send us some more. I've read all three. Tongue hanging out for me! Tom Billsborough

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Soul Watcher 18 July 2016

Loving you even though you don't deserve it This is the love that we can do nothing when it happens, we just obey the heart. Well done, thank you for sharing

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 July 2016

She holds onto a love long gone Living in a naive hope Loving you even though you don't deserve it she waits and keeps on waiting for your love........... full of feelings and emotions you write about this kind of waiting....... may be he will come to sense and come back to you...... tony

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