She Waited On The Threshold… Comments

a fantastic poem in which the powerful emotions are portrayed beautifuly and with great elegance 10+++

I really like this, and the way the simple truth is arrived at, without any theatrics.

ohh yes, a lovely poem. very true. tackles the awkwardness very well. loved it. simple and straight-forward. thank you.

A very novel way of presenting.......I feel it is more Indian; may not be a not much known style to the west.........so good to read.......something like Kannadaasan's or our Telugu Atreya's song......

This is heart felt and pensive writing Kesav. Communication is the key to open the door. Much wisdom here... 10

Hello Kesav A very poetically..and poignantly..but point device..and point to point..nice again..10+

There is certainly more to this than the eye can see -.a mutual admiration and fondness for the expressive approach to poetic philosophy that is rave and ravishing. Well done and far reaching through the corridors of the heart to the innermost part. Thanks for sharing, kesav - arya

She dares not though she could dare and he imagines not though he could........your expressions ring a bell...........but let her not imagine and let him not dare.................for..........the open door is the platform of poetry where both can wring their hearts out with their bold voices called words...........very lovely piece venkat and I like the revelling bit in your soul..............mandara

oh, this is a very poignant, beautiful write.Well done, Kesav.

WoW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! wonderful poem I liked it congrats and regards sandhya

I`d say a matured expression of eternal subject, good work

A very symbolic poem.... poetic rendezvous featured...nice....10

Your title says it all. I think of the old saying, 'Love is not love 'till you give it away'. Very poignant. 10, for you. Best regards, Sandra

poetic and fine...............good write

Wow! ! ! What a profound poem, great representation here...fantastic as always! ! ! From the start i have read your poems, you never fail to amuse me with your brilliance in creativity and cleverness of your lines! ! !

Wonderfully penned poem. especially loved the line, 'A door open to openness', so vivid! It's always a pleasure to read you.

a door open to openness...this line says a million it could save the world even....wonderful poem sir..into my favs

A door open to openness Would have served out a lot better Where they could have exited And entered alike as they liked... ................a small step, and how difficult!

no door to behold- relationship knots can't be untied without rising above your ego and keeping an open mind. these walls or doors are of our making. the last stanza says so much- openess and need for space to breathe. very thought provoking write 10 Mamta

sometimes we build our own doors and walls....and then wonder....why are we alone....